Monday, April 21, 2008
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Hello students of Mr. Wood's Grade 5/6 classroom at Vradenburg PS! This blog spot is now available for you to post your own comments which answer different questions that I will be asking. Your posts should be one paragraph long, with your first name at the bottom. Just click on "comments" at the bottom of my posting to get started.
25 comments:
So much depends
upon
a blue car
splattered with mud
speeding down the road.
by Jack
Room 105 - Miss Stretchberry
So much depends upon
a goalie
flashing the leather
and skating off the ice,
at the end of 3 twenty minute periods.
Joshua.B
So much depends
upon
groups of digging
worms
eaten by flying
hawks
in the busy
zoo.
By David!!!!!!!!!!
So much depends
upon
a baseball bat
marked with bruses
entertaining the crowd
by: Christopher
so much depends
upon
children
cheeful and active
playing on the monkey bars
Lillian
so much depends
upon
a burning
fire
bright and
warm
people around
it
sarina
So much depends
upon
a brown house
painted with colour insde
with living people.
by:Thiviyan
So much depends
upon
on a fire
truck
loading lots of
water
leaving tracks on
roads.
from Jay
My Bicycle
so much depends
upon
a speeding bicycle
colours whizzing and
flashing by
riding it day after
day
pedaling faster and
harder each time
Dea
so much depends
upon
a really good
author
making the story
good
writing and writing
about
what should be
understood
by SpIrOo
A Loving Family
So much depends
upon
a loving
family
the warmth in their heart
keeps us warm at night
the people who brought
us to this world
Nothing can compare to
the love that they give
This is
truly love
Evelyn
A LITTLE STRONG TREE
So much depends
upon
A little strong
tree
Covered in
moss
Breathing-out
oxygen
A LITTLE YELLOW SPIDER
So much depends
upon
A little yellow
spider
Weaving a
web
And catching
bugs
Caroline
The Pencil
So much depends
upon
an orange,sharp
pencil
scratching across the
paper
leaving scrapes of
led.
Momin
The Knife
So much depends
upon
A black cutting
knife
A blunt tipped
razor
Beside a sliced
tomato
Rahul
So much depends
upon
a simple wooden
comb
littered with dirt
and dust
knots and tangles
ruled out
Christina
So much depends
upon
the hot sun
showing its brightness
to everyone
and shining in our faces.
Rachel
The Bike
so much depends
upon
a orange speedy
bike
sprayed with black
oil
speeding down the
hill
Mohammad
so much depends
upon
an orange sun
big and bright
every one is under it
By YiLin
The Running Shoes
So much depends
upon
Torn up sneakers,
being
replaced with something
more
appealing to the
eye
-Adam
So much depends
upon
A pink
eraser
Rubbing on
the mistakes
Leaving peices
of rubber
atchuthan
So much depends
upon
a golden sun
that shines on my face
that gives me light
Britney
so much depends
upon
a green tree
stand at the groud
don't care the wind
don't care the rain
Vicky
So much depends
upon
the colourful singing
bird
that sits in my
window
and wakes me up every
morning
Mahnoor
So much depends
upon
soccer net
To be scored on
Without it ther5e will be no goal!
So much depeends
Upon
The wet rain
To be drank
And to be there when
it's needed
Andy#0
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