Monday, May 26, 2008

My Yellow Dog - by Jack

My yellow dog
followed me everywhere
every which way I turned
he was there
wagging his tail
and slobber
coming out
of his mouth
when he was smiling
at me
all the time
as if he was
saying
thank you thank you thank you
for choosing me
and jumping up on me
his shaggy stragly paws
on my chest
like he was trying
to hug the insides
right out of me.

And when us kids
were playing outside
kicking the ball
he'd chase after it
and push it with his nose
push push push
and getting slobber
all over the ball
but no one cared
because he was such
a funny dog
that dog Sky
that straggly furry
smiling
dog
Sky.

And I'd call him
every morning
every evening
Hey there Sky!

Task:
Write a poem about your favourite pet. This can be a pet you have, or used to have, or a pet that you would like to have one day. Try to write your poem in a similar style and format as Jack did in this Blog entry. Remember to put (by: YOUR NAME) after your poem's title in a new comment.

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

My fish

By Momin

Anonymous said...

I wish I had a dog.
A nice dog.
With a nice smile
and bark.
If that happened
I would enjoy it
so much.
I would have loads of fun
with him.
I would name him rags.
Because
it just feels right
to me.
We would have a blast!

Anonymous said...

Pet Orca

One day,
I will have
a pet Orca as a friend.
He would be
in the huge tank
called the ocean.
He would come to shore
every day
every night
when it's snowy
when it's bright
I would give him
a salmon as a treat.
He would jump,
splash,
sing for fun,
with others of his kind.
One day,
everyone will have
a pet Orca for a friend,
they would be
living in a huge tank,
called the ocean.

By David Ortiz!!!!

Anonymous said...

My Gray Cat-By Adam
My cat follows me
around when he
hears I had a treat
for him. He would
brush his body against
my leg.He would
meow and meow until
I gave him a
treat.He would chase
me around when I
had a string hanging
from my hand.When
I was tired, he
would make a sad
face as if he were
saying
play with me play with me
I would carry him
to his bed and
tuck him in.He
would soon fall asleep and that would be the
end of his day.

Anonymous said...

My orange tiger
his fur shining
bright in the light.
Everwhere I went
he would follow me
and protect me.
I would hold a hoop
in the air
and he would jump
though it.



Yang
I would feed him
meat flesh
and he would gouble
it down in
less than one
minute.

He was a adorable
tiger and he
doesn't bite people
unless they don't
give me what i want.



Yang

Anonymous said...

My fish

My fish

Was orange

and it was swimming

and swishing

so I looked at it

and wondered

what is it thinking

so I feed it

and looked

it looked back

I smiled and

it smiled back

and I realized

that it needed

a friend

so I gave it some

more treats and

then I left

By: Andy

Anonymous said...

My blue bird-by Mohammad

My blue bird
sitting in its cage
watching me as I ate breakfast
chirping out loud
with its black eyes
staring saying
food,food,food,food
then I noticed
that the food box was empty
flying everywhere
when I put my hand in the cage
and refilled the box
and when I watch lion king
and they say
Pumba
he looks up
and starts chirping...
PUMBA!

Anonymous said...

Every Sunday,
I'd go to the
pet store.


The dogs there were
friendly and playful.

They would bark and jump
playfully!
Some even looked like
they smiled at me!!!^_^

It looked like the
dogs were saying
"PLAY WITH ME! PLAY WITH ME!"

I wanted to play with them
and take them home.
But sadly, I wasn't allowed to
have a dog.

As I watched the dogs I
wanted to shout out
"COME WITH ME!!!!!"

Oh how I long for a dog!!!
To play with them,
cuddle
and to be companions.

One day,
I will have a dog
and the words "COME PLAY WITH ME!"
will be no need.

I'll have a dog
and I will
cherish
my best memories
with it.
Everyday.
Everywhere.
Forever.

We will keep eachother company.

---Lillian

Anonymous said...

When I was little,
my parents bought me 5 fishs.
In the morning,
I would always feed them food,
they would always rush to eat.

Until one day one,
one of the fishs died. >o<
It was horrible!!!!!!
I was really sad until
all of my fishs died!!! @o@
So that's why
my parents never bought me a pet.

Well before that
I had pet pumkins before,
only until it rot.
cuz there were white stuff on it,
I had about 3 or 4
of the pumkins.

And that is why I never had a pet again.
I would be really sad. >.<

sarina ^-^

Anonymous said...

My Cat Cujo By Spiro

My cat Cujo
with his gushing fur
roaming the streets
capturing mice
what a delight
eating cat niblets
sleeping all day
going out at night
mating with others
being a great father

Anonymous said...

I have 2 cats
They are as different of
day and night.
One is mostly upstairs
and the other is mostly down stairs.
One is three years old in human life.
The other is seventeen in human life
They both like to nap.
They both like to be petted and hugged.
I love them both.
Their names are Moka and Reggie.
Caroline

Anonymous said...

My white and gold dog
fat
always lying down
waitig for food
begging
even crying
lazy
old
waiting for a meal
all she does is
eat
sleep
and bark.

But back then
she was
fun active
and does
things that real
dogs do.

by; Christopher

Anonymous said...

My frog
My yellow frog named Kero
He follow me to school every day
He like to eat sweet
Like to play games
And fight with his friends

Anonymous said...

My black,yellow,purple,red,green, blue and white fishes. They swam freely in the fish tank. My angel fish's silver srteams flashed in the iluminated sparkiling water.
My red little fish swim swiftly throught the caves.

by 4tchuthu4n

Anonymous said...

My Rabbit,by Dea
My black and white rabbit
Loves to run and be free
I let him go and play
Each time I go out
He finds me and
Runs around my feet
His little nose and
Whiskers moving up and down
Staring at me with
His big round
Eyes


Whenever my friends come
He hops onto them
And starts licking
Them
his little whiskers
tickling my face
When he hears a
noise he stands
In alert
And thats when I
Know
My brother and sister are making trouble

My littlr rabbit is
Cute and cuddly
That's why I
love him so much.